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Enchanted

It seems to come alive at night This house From the ground up Dirty and Grimy While the sun shines No life to be seen For miles around But the night Sparks burst Animals reunite In longing The house But only at night.

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/29/2016 1:21:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brenda. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2016 12:11:00 AM

Brenda, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2016 7:47:00 PM

By, the way, this is nice, Brenda , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Brenda Phillips
Date: 5/22/2016 8:07:00 PM

Thank you!! :) I checked out some of your poems, and I really liked 'Playing Human'. I have 0 experience in poetry, and this is my first time trying to create one myself.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2016 7:46:00 PM

Brenda, sOrry to be the one to tell you, this is not an abc form. No worries it's a common thing with the new poets. You might want to put it under "I don't know." That way it won't confuse the ones looking up the forms. Hugs. Linda