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Empty Space

EMPTY SPACE  an aesthetic experience  is the image nothing occupies time& space  contradictions  both  proliferate  &  sit  in counterpoint  the timeframe  is over then  revived  differently in continual inventiveness  slipping  through our fingers exploding the concept   increasingly  participation controls us passively   slipping  from  freedom  once more NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable. Copyright © Brian Strand

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Date: 9/6/2022 1:36:00 PM
This poem really pulls me into it. Interesting and well done :)
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