Empty Jars

Empty things- Empty rooms-filled with things- Empty vases-empty jars Empty seats- Cupboards that are bare- Corridors-in my mind- Long and narrow-alone I stare- Vacant land - You once – were there! 17/11/92

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/30/2012 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations Victoria x

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Brenda. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2012 12:29:00 AM

Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Reading this easily places vivid images in my mind.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/28/2012 7:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2012 7:39:00 PM

wow, I would have rated this one higher. It's unique and I love what you are saying here. Congrats on your win, Brenda!!

David Williams

Date: 1/28/2012 1:01:00 PM

Brenda congrats on your win, nice take on the theme..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2012 12:33:00 PM

congrats Brenda on a splendid win for superb poetry on jars theme luv..

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/28/2012 12:01:00 PM

I like this Brenda. I would have scored it higher. Congratulations