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I wonder why I dont cry Even though i wish to die Forever stuck in this pit of sorrow I wish there was no tomorrow Just another day thats filled with tears You where here all those years Now that your gone All i want is for you to be here...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2009 12:46:00 PM
interesting. Reminds me of some of the things i write about. Read some of my poems. (Why?, said by a girl, when i say you) are a few. there are more. Cool write. Autumn
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Date: 7/29/2009 11:14:00 PM
short and powerful. Also loved the truthfulness of this whole write. Enjoy your night.
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Date: 7/19/2009 6:32:00 AM
makes me think of the many people i have lost along the way, great poem, keep up the good work :)
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Date: 7/18/2009 11:08:00 AM
i feel your pain. cehck out some of my poems
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