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Empty Hollow Girl

Deep dark shadows crawling from my mind i looked for love but its something i couldnt find shallow water empty glasses hollow hearts and torn up faces darkened streets full of empty people all feeling dead inside at the ones who have lied find me Im waiting for you waiting for something to become true Empty hollow girl alone without a smile empty hollow girl does'nt belong in this cruel world searching her soul for the one who remains searching a dream for days empty hollow little girl will make it one day but at whose price will she pay? she made it through the darkened streets with a heart of steel wishing she could only feel feel his arms around her tight hoping for a shining bright light but he never came so in the dark she will remain feeling once like she did all over again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/12/2010 2:35:00 PM
carolyn hunni thankyou for youre concern but this was a poem i wrote back in early 2009 when i had a mental breakdown and was really poorly i just found it so please dont worry xxx
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Date: 5/12/2010 9:22:00 AM
Lady V, I truly hope you aren't feeling sad right now. The title describes the isolating feeling of depression very well, as do the words in your poem. Hope happiness casts some light into your life in "the darkened streets." Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2010 8:38:00 AM
well done enjoyed the deep write, have your self a nice one,..p.d.
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