Empty Buildings

Abandoned buildings Along the street row on row They watch and they wait

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 4/29/2017 2:09:00 AM

Hi Darlene, on my first visit to you I exclaim: what a beautiful name! . Your haiku isnt half bad also he he. Thanks for your visit to me. I am reading on...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2017 3:38:00 PM

Hello Jannie,Thank you.So glad that you like my poem.Please feel free toread on.

Eric Erb

Date: 11/27/2016 1:08:00 PM

Deliciously forlorn, pensive

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/27/2016 1:43:00 PM

Hello Eric,Yes it is pensive and forlorn.

Stephen Pennell

Date: 9/27/2016 2:56:00 PM

sounds like my home town , empty shops

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2016 10:44:00 AM

I hope those empty buoldings get filled up soon.People need the stores to shop.It was a sad poem for me to write.

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 9/5/2016 1:07:00 PM

Great Haiku, really enjoyed reading this.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2016 1:00:00 PM

Hello Seosamh thank you for your comment on my poetry.I look forword to reading yours.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/2/2016 5:59:00 PM

Feeling a little lonely today, Darlene? Another great haiku.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2016 1:03:00 PM

Hello Daniel The day I wrote this poem I did feel lonely. You picked that out from my poetry! Wow! That was a good guess. I am impressed.