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Empty Boots

The empty boots, neatly laced and, alas, now on display, Belonged to a gallant soldier who died the other day. Another patriot gave his all in the service of his nation. He placed service above self to fulfill his solemn obligation. At his memorial, the roll was called, his comrades answered "Here!" When his name was called there was no response evoking many a tear. His captain presented the folded flag to his little son on bended knee. The little fellow clutched it closely to his breast - he was only three. Not only are there empty boots, there are empty arms as well. Aching arms that could not comfort him when he fell. Empty arms that once held him in fond embrace, Will no longer tenderly caress this noble warrior's face. There will be empty hearts that will yearn forever more, Recalling precious memories of the one whom they adore. There will be an empty chair that no one can ever fill, Though his presence will ever remain with them still. Can his kin find solace in that trite phrase, "He didn't die in vain?" His comrades with heavy hearts will strive to ease their pain. The haunting notes of "Taps" echoed throughout the air, As the chaplain intoned, "We commend him to Thy eternal care!" Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 2 in PD's "Emotional Poem" Contest - April 2012

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Date: 4/23/2012 9:48:00 AM
Very powerful.
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Date: 4/13/2012 2:24:00 PM
You highlight an important event here which never seems to end generation after generation. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2012 5:07:00 PM
So good as always! Congrad's on your win! Light & love
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Date: 4/12/2012 4:31:00 AM
Whenever I come to read your poems, I'm left overwhelmed and always take back something which I simply cannot describe in words. What wars do to so many lives,, those who leave and those who are left and the words of solace do sound trite. Thanks Robert for sharing your deepest feelings. love, gautami
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations Bob. I was only three when my dad was lost in the war so this one really moved me. Mike
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Date: 4/10/2012 8:45:00 PM
You're right , Bob. Sometimes these recited phrases on these solemn occasions may seem trite...nothing really can ease the pain...Great write full of patriotism. Congrats, friend. Gwendolen ps...gonna see that Henry Fonda movie possibly tonite. :)
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations Bob!!! on your wonderful win...still having trouble with this one...well done...big huggsss my friend,love debs
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Bob, with this amazing write. I am touched and find myself running for the box of tissue. I don't think I'll make it through all of these emotional reads tonight. God bless you, dear Bob, and your gift for storytelling. Rhonda
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:14:00 PM
You sure have a way with words, Bob. This is an emotional piece and I know why it won. Great job!
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:31:00 AM
This one brought out my emotions in a very big way. Excellent write and congratulations on the win.
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win,with this very emotional poem...I'm finding it very hard to give comments with this touching contest..
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:04:00 AM
You have a wealth of beautiful stories...some are light, and some are sad, but with each one, you are a remarkable writer. Another journey we have taken with your heart. Thank you.
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:48:00 AM
Bob big congrats for your win, a geat tribute to all our service men and women ..David
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:15:00 AM
congrats on your win.. cory
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Date: 4/10/2012 9:51:00 AM
Bob H., , congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:49:00 AM
I must say sorry for not using your name in my last comment Bob, and thank you so much for the writes you post..)
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Date: 4/7/2012 8:22:00 AM
A very moving poem on a tragic situation,, you have filled my screen with your discription of the scene there..)
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:29:00 PM
Only someone who's been there could write like this. It gave me goose bumps to read this Bob, you never fail to amaze me with the scope of your poetry! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 4/5/2012 1:52:00 PM
this is beautiful and perfect for the contest. i love the image of empty boots and the unanswered roll call (didn't know about that but think it's a wonderful tradition). you've really captured so much in this poem!
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Date: 4/4/2012 11:22:00 PM
Superbly written as usual, Bob. This is a great poetic tribute to the fallen hero.
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Date: 4/4/2012 9:26:00 PM
Bob how wonderful...you never cease to amaze me....I could only quickly skim through your very touching piece at this point...but I will revisit it on another day...when familiar wounds are not so prevelant in my mind....Awsome gift you have...big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/4/2012 4:02:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes, Bob. Picturing the three year old son being handed the folded flag, breaks my heart. An excellent write, Bob. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/4/2012 3:27:00 PM
A great tribute to all who have served their country. Best of luck in the contest.
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