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Empty Apartment

I turn into my driveway, sit quietly for a moment, half expecting the door to open with your smiling welcome. Stopping at the mailbox first, I find it almost empty, nothing but some ads of no interest to me. I pick up the daily paper, damp from the rain, glance at the headlines. Boring. I drop it on the hall table. My raincoat goes into the coat closet, which looks twice as big without your heavy coat taking up space and snuggling next to mine. This place once so warm and cozy seems suddenly aloof, treating me like a stranger. No cheery fire, no food aroma greets me. Checking the refrigerator, I remember. I intended to stop at the store. Opening a box of cereal, I pour milk from an almost empty container, settle down in front of the TV and reach for the remote.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/20/2010 4:29:00 PM
So many people are faced with this kind of life..You have expressed it so well..Reads like a winner to me..I was delighted that you dropped by my work about the Halloween Carnival ....Thanks for the kind remarks..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2010 2:02:00 PM
Thanks for your comments about my father, Joyce. He wa truly special!! Everyone who met him liked him. We miss his sense of humor and loving nature very much. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2010 9:44:00 PM
a very descriptive write of how I would feel going and living in an apartment,,I never lived in an apartment ever, I have always lived in a house and a home,,lived in the same house for 45 years,,I must explain, usually the kids leave their home,My parents moved out and gave me the house,,see they were house flippers before it was a fad,,they flipped somehwere around eight houses and lived in three of them,,and gave each of my brothers one,we were exceptionally lucky and loved,Blessings, Cecil.
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Date: 11/18/2010 4:14:00 PM
Wonderful entry Joyce .. good luck in the contest luv.. so many I have read in two days ..great competition.. this one.. my entry is "Up in Smoke" about leaving romance behind in the empty apartment luv..
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Date: 11/18/2010 1:16:00 PM
You have collected nice thoughts in tranquility of the apartment in which you once lived, Joyce
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:45:00 AM
joyce,love lost is life gained.. your visual treatment of this piece is amazing... a winning streak in the contest. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/18/2010 5:38:00 AM
Life goes on, as you know, Joyce. It is a strange feeling indeed to still reside in a place you once shared with someone you loved. I really like the way you described his coat "snuggling" with yours in the past. Very touching entry for the contest and a winner for sure. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/17/2010 11:58:00 PM
A great piece..this is exactly what its like..especially the cereal and the tv..I smell a winner...BG
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Date: 11/17/2010 10:42:00 PM
just as long as you don't become a cat person lol,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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