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I wanted to write about how I felt Somehow, the paper stayed empty I couldn't have described it Any better than that

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Date: 11/3/2016 8:46:00 AM
I like the way you've described that empty feeling, with the image of the blank page - very clever write, though sad. I hope you don't feel empty for long. Hugs
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Date: 11/3/2016 8:40:00 AM
Avery, yes sometimes the paper stays empty but the poetic mind is never still always in the background creating, it is more powerful than you imagine, you can use it to take you above all pain ~
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Date: 11/3/2016 8:03:00 AM
Great poem! I'm sorry your feeling so low, Avery.
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