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The more stuff we buy, the more crowded our life seems. A crowded life does not lend itself to free thoughts and love for your brain. We all probably have too much clutter as it is, it's ok to get rid of half our stuff.

Empty is the target, Empty is the dream. Empty is the sought after Beautiful colour scheme. Empty our life, Empty our soul. Empty our house That’s the goal. Empty our world, Empty our bed. Empty our room And clean out our head. Void of clutter, No more weight. Void of muck And free to create.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/1/2016 9:17:00 PM
Oddly, I enjoyed the repetition and rhyme!
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Date: 6/1/2016 9:19:00 PM
thanks Frankii
Date: 8/3/2015 8:17:00 PM
I like it. That's where my wife and I have been going these last 10 years.
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Date: 8/6/2015 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Gregg, I think heaps of us are on the same journey.

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