Empty

I walk through the lonely, empty, dark streets of my mind. Overwhelmed by the troubles outside my brain. I try to think but I'm stuck in a black hole of thoughts. I don't know what to do physically, mentally, physically, mentally. My mind has drawn a blank.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 5/27/2014 7:44:00 AM

Yep, this feeling is familiar. Well wrote. Looking forward to reading more.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/21/2014 10:42:00 PM

Fear not this too shall pass. Just be thankful you are not one of those doomed to live such a hell always.. A write about emptiness that is so full of despair Bravo!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 8:06:00 PM

I know this feeling, I walk this feeling... Empty, and stuck in a blank thought... well expressed...LINDA