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here I go again dipping into my well of inspiration and coming up empty how long has it been? seems like time has stopped, stuck at 12 'o clock stumped this well that I'm talking about only has fumes suffocating, then floating away to nothingness I stare blankly and let my mind wander but all I see are roadblocks don't know where to start helpless so I dip again into that well of abysmal nothingness hopeful that I might scoop up something...anything the bucket slips plunges into that oblivion, lost to infinity it seems so I walk away, sighing then I hear a "clink!" the faintest of clinks that would have ever existed but I heard it that well all along has always been empty ***Sept. 14, 2010

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Date: 12/16/2011 12:51:00 PM
I can hear ya, nikko...it's been so hard to write something for the past weeks, 'my well is empty' for sure...I just hope I can hear a clink soon though...nicely done, dearie! :* Can totally relate to it.
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:29:00 PM
I'm coming up empty again on poems to repond to of yours. hahaha. But I really do appreciate your seeing so many of mine all the time. You are the greatest! Andrea
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Date: 9/14/2010 9:01:00 PM
well, gosh , that is pretty depressing. hahahaha. Kind of like a recent poem I wrote! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/14/2010 10:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Nikko. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2010 9:52:00 PM
enjoyed this,Nikko very profound. Harry
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:47:00 PM
Hey Nikko! I love the metaphor here, so fitting and really sort of describes where I am right now. Nicely done! Best wishes, hugs, Kris
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Date: 9/13/2010 4:39:00 PM
wow! Nikko, i feel the same way right now.. empty, i just don't know of what. that is what happens when things get silly. empty, of love energy lol, even of thoughts. As for my well it is full, if i pull up a pail it is full of water. but the emptyness comes from all the holes my bucket has. lol. get it. i can pull of water, but it all flows out from all them holes my bucket has. leaving my pail empty all over again..always always empty,..*enjoyed your poem*,..p.d.
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Date: 9/13/2010 3:21:00 PM
sounds like myself today...have no umph for anything.
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Date: 9/13/2010 2:55:00 PM
well done Nikko...always a joy to read your work.... Michael
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