Empty

I feel so empty, deep inside, A hollow space, where feelings hide. But I'll fill it up, bit by bit, With love and hope, I won't quit.

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/27/2023 2:50:00 PM

a nicely composed piece of consciousness

Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/29/2023 4:02:00 AM

thank you Mat for your comment. i'm trying my best to reflect my feelings in these poems.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/18/2023 10:21:00 AM

Yes thats the spirit, somedays i feel hollow and empty too, This is such a sincere and heartfelt write, you’ve expressed so much in few words. Sending you light today and always

Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/18/2023 10:24:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. I guess feeling empty it's not that bad if you keep going and have faith in a better tomorrow. :-)