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12/06/23

 

EMPTINESS CHASING Emptiness chasing me Encircling, enclosing encompassing ! Through final stage of life I am passing : Where can I flee? Life transcending to last phase, Dull hazy sky above to gaze, None to blame or to praise. Static, stagnant without glamour or glee. Mind walks on emptiness Lone sailor on voyage, sailing aimless. Nothing to achieve more. Nothing to lose from core. Nothing new to explore. Matters little being careful or careless. All the achievements turned obsolete. Mattered very little whether in victory or defeat or stayed behind or touched summit . Everything seems now meaningless , dragging life purposeless ! At end of path me bound to abandon . all desired collections ! The last realisation.

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Date: 12/6/2023 4:10:00 PM
Hey, it ain't over til the fat lady sings:) Dont give up yet. You still have more to do. Take some piano lessons:)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2023 9:04:00 PM
Thanks and Blessings.
Date: 12/6/2023 10:50:00 AM
Deep introspection, expressed so well..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2023 9:04:00 PM
Bad luck. I missed your last contest. I wrote a poem for contest but forgot to send. Blessings .

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