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Emptiness

Theirs a big empty space within my soul There’s a void and incomplete gap, I cannot close I am like the wave of the ocean I am full yet empty I am rough yet smooth I am far yet near I am crafty yet cunning I am enticing yet deceitful I am a friend yet an enemy I love yet I manipulate I smile but you know neither my tale nor my pain I have few stories yet many secrets I am a victim within my own tale I am that reflection you see When looking into the deep blue sea I am invisible yet broken I am that mirror Looking back at you What do you see? Yourself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/10/2010 10:55:00 PM
WOW, I LIKE THIS IS PERSONAL AND VERY DEEP, UNDERSTANDABLE
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Patricia . Garcia Howard Bramble
Date: 5/3/2019 6:59:00 AM
thank you
Date: 5/10/2010 4:34:00 PM
strong write
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Date: 5/3/2019 7:00:00 AM
thank you

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