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Empoverished

bricks neatly stacked (just) a means to an end (waiting) wondering how long it will take (for love) (to) complete the wall ending the warmth the need, to care to love (die) i cry and watch. Shadow

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Pat Davis

Date: 8/27/2015 4:30:00 PM

Wow Cori! Very powerful! Love the message within the message in your Cummings style, although painful.

Skat A

Date: 8/23/2015 12:10:00 AM

Cori, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**

Cori Wunderlin
Date: 8/26/2015 11:47:00 PM

Thank you so much! Unfortunately I missed viewing this as a "featured poem" but am honored.

Pam Deremer

Date: 8/5/2015 3:49:00 PM

Another good one! Can you write more????

Cori Wunderlin
Date: 8/5/2015 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Pam, I appreciate your interest in my work. I am in the middle of some projects right now but will look to add more work soon. Cori