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Emotional Meltdown

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Emotional Meltdown

"Emotional Meltdown" Slumber ... refuses to invade my warm bed as I listen to promises swirling in my head to an emotional meltdown ... in the mirror, there stands a clown ... Dreamland ... eluding my starry eyes as I wander in sad masquerade disguise to an emotional meltdown ... as I destroy white wedding gown ... Forever ... you offered forever, and I believed you with fire in my heart, Eternal ... you whispered eternal, yet your jaded love quickly tore us apart. Betrayal ... is an ugly and unkind state of mind sharp as a dagger thrust plunged from behind Sleepwalking shall never end and illusions pretend midnight amends my emotional meltdown ... *For Craig Cornish's Sleepwalk Contest. *Lyrics written to Sleepwalk melody. *Oct. 5, 2012.

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:56:00 AM
    this is me right now... SKAt

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Very unique take on the song sweetie! I likie! Congrad's on your win SO glad to be back! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:00:00 PM
    Congratualtions on your win.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Big congratulations Linda xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:19:00 AM
    Awesome, Linda, and big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:06:00 AM
    WON 7TH PLACE .. THANKXX ..

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:54:00 AM
    You're both great poet and song writer my dear friend, Linda-M! So beautiful song and i love it! Congratulations on your win! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:31:00 AM
    charming me with your romantic touch, sweets... congrats on the top win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:25:00 AM
    Congratulations Linda. .......Seren

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:19:00 PM
    Linda, congrats on this well deserved win!

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:12:00 PM
    Hello Linda, my bff..., congratulations with your awesome poem in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest :-) take care~PD

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 5:44:00 PM
    congrats on a fantastic win Linda

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:11:00 PM
    very powerful write, my friend. Hope your hands are better. Love to you all xx

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:25:00 AM
    Emotionally touching write, love it, luv!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:11:00 PM
    A very touching write Linda, I particularly loved the line "I believed you with fire in my heart" it expresses the core of your jaded feelings, glad I stopped in to read tonight, love vie ps. thank you for your support, and your poem for my contest, surprised me, that a girl...

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:53:00 PM
    This is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed this fully delightful and wonderful poem, prime for the song I must admit! You have done this song well I believe! This is quite the write, I love it! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:50:00 PM
    Linda, my sweet bff,, only you can melt the words in a poem, with your pen..I love this poem... good luck in this contest... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:11:00 PM
    SLEEPWALK ... ONE OF MY FAVORITE INSTRUMENTALS OF ALL TIME .. SLOW ..SEXY .. HAUNTING .. MEMORABLE .. HOPE MY LYRICS DO THE MELODY JUSTICE POETS .. ENJOY WITH LUV .. SUNDAY WE R BAPTIZING OUR NEW LITTLE GUY .. SO CUTE ..