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Emotion

I fail to see the emotion in your eyes...that I love you that make strong woman weak and weak woman strong. I fail to see the emotion in your eyes,That,That I love you utter seems All too vague and shallow...Your heart racing, palms sweating,unable to look me straight in the eye...yet... I fail to see the emotion in your eyes. Guess I must be too distracted by the movement in your pants Even as you move left and right,sway up and down its all too clear I fail to see the emotion in your eyes as that,that erect,solid unnamed gets clearer...brother please tell me,have you climaxed yet?? I fail to see the emotion in your eyes,as lust is all over your face please dear,give me a chance to dress my naked body in that mind of yours I fail to see the emotion in your eyes as from afar the stench of lust caught my attention.

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Janet Eaton

Date: 2/21/2015 10:00:00 AM

Very powerful write Congratulations on having your poem featured on soups home page. Janet

Skat A

Date: 2/19/2015 6:36:00 PM

Mbalenhle:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 2/16/2015 7:23:00 AM

It's almost impossible, Mbalenhle Lyca Khumalo, to stop that beautiful illusion or the emotion, as you put it, that brings the lover to undress, but also fondle and caress -in the spirit of course!tTo me, your poem is a complaint against honnest lovers, a choice for cold or indefferent ones!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2014 4:23:00 PM

MBALENHLE,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/11/2014 5:06:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mbalenhle - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mbalenhle Lyca Khumalo
Date: 12/11/2014 7:09:00 AM

Thank you very much for your very warm words and welcome Anne I too look forward to reading the work of poets across the world, learning from them and interacting with them. I am very much excited about this and I believe it is a very big step forward for me....ecstatic Lee :-)