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Emminent Death

Helplessly she lies waiting for deliverance from eminent death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/18/2010 9:44:00 AM
Interesting Haiku...Evokes many questions..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 5/17/2010 12:29:00 PM
Such a striking write, Jimmy--just a note on the spelling for "imminent"--aside from that, such a powerful write...& thank you for always dropping by my poems...:)
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:10:00 PM
Sad Haiku. May God bless her soul.
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:55:00 PM
great Haiku here. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your nice comment. All the very best, Iolanda
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:22:00 PM
So sad yet true Jimmy .your words have described the photo perfectly and good luck in the new contest... as always ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" .. a sad tragedy ...
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:21:00 PM
Poignant lines Jimmy! Great Job! Jeralynn Congrats on all your wins...nice work!
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:44:00 PM
Well done, Jimmy! This should be in the top of the winning circle! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:32:00 PM
Hey Jam, I wish you good luck in Raul's Contest! This is so sad, for both man and helpless creatures..Much love, PB
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Date: 5/13/2010 10:29:00 AM
Nicely done. Sad, powerful words. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/13/2010 10:03:00 AM
Powerful!! Good luck in the contest~Rick
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