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Emma

Emma was a frail little thing Lying there in her hospital bed Tethered by tubes to this mortal life Not a hair on her tiny sweet head As I cared for her medical needs She sometimes spoke quietly to me Her spirit was strong even then A wonderful soul I began to see She asked me not to be sad for her As if she knew something I did not Not it seemed, the least bit afraid But so tired of the fight she fought I never saw her sweet face again But remember her I always will She was the essence of bravery When life is difficult I think of her still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/4/2014 4:47:00 PM
This is touching! Congrats on your fine win, B L!!!
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Date: 3/2/2014 3:28:00 AM
Lovely character-sketch of Emma. Congrats on the fine win, barbara
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Date: 3/1/2014 11:00:00 PM
Congrats on the win Barbara . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
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Date: 3/1/2014 10:44:00 PM
A profound and powerful write.....yet very sad...
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:45:00 PM
So lovely and emotional great entery for the emma contest i wish you luck but with this write i don't believe you'll need it dear, and yes the let it snow contest was bunches of fun. cheri
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Date: 1/30/2014 10:20:00 AM
A sobering write, but as such it has great emotional tug. Beauty in pain and bravery through trying circumstances are both excellent qualities, and the poem would be great with either one. With both I think it's awesome!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/30/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thanks, I value your opinion.
Date: 1/29/2014 9:07:00 PM
Touched my heart, as I am no stranger to sickness. You are a beautiful writer! .... Misty
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Date: 1/29/2014 1:27:00 PM
Great work about a very sick child..Enjoyed reading this one today..It was very emotive and expressive contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:25:00 PM
Nice touching write. Good luck with it in the Emma contest.
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Date: 1/27/2014 6:52:00 AM
amazing, Skat
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Date: 1/27/2014 12:32:00 AM
Very inspirational write on Emma, Barbara
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Date: 1/26/2014 5:00:00 PM
very touching and lovingly written...
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Date: 1/26/2014 2:37:00 PM
moving and beautiful write, my friend - congrats on your wins too
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Date: 1/26/2014 10:19:00 AM
So Beautiful. The courage of a child is amazing...You will do well in the contest...Tim
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