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Emergency Room

E nter the waiting chamber M oments seem like hours E veryone stays away R est on the gurney G host of those that died here E nter and brush the curtains N ow here then gone C ause that is all that one sees Y earning to get answers R emove to x-ray O perative answers will come O pen to options M aybe (I wrote this awhile back nothing new has happened.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2011 10:20:00 AM
Good acrostic on this topic, SAra. Oh, don't worry about my driving. haha. Usually I just go straight to work on the freeway and back home. I get plenty of relaxation. haha. LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:19:00 AM
original , creative, one of a kind. who would have thought. i can see you sitting in a waiting room with pen and paper and a ephipany. lol T.S.
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:14:00 AM
You expressed the helplessness of the emergency room well in this fine acrostic poem~~
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:19:00 AM
The only thing is Sara that those moments turn into hours waiting to be seen....lol Jimmy
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:00:00 PM
Hi Sara-- you sure described the feelings of being in the ER so well here-- I think it is the waiting that is most frustrating....prayers continue for you and your family-- thanks for dropping by my poems :)
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:49:00 PM
Been there done that too, Sara. brings back some memories for sure. Never thought of writing about it but that's what poetry is about. Cool
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:01:00 PM
Been there before, some happy endings and some sadly not... enjoyed your thoughts today my dear Poet friend..luv Michael
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