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Emerald Green Waters

Beauty of emerald green waters Of river at Niagara Falls Thousands of gallons everyday Is nothing in comparison to thoughts Thoughts that flow, get captured in stream Where they meet other thoughts in flow Good thoughts coast free touching others Negative thoughts stick, form black holes Like the felled tree on the stream That catches all the dead debris Negative thoughts stick and feed each Other building a bad attitude As the water in the main path Flows free coursing on its way to Sea, good thoughts continue on to bless By word or deed others we meet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2010 5:15:00 PM
You have a good personification here Sara. Water flowing as thoughts and log jams in the water as densities of evil thoughts among other good free flowing thoughts. Good job, girl. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:14:00 PM
Another lovely written piece Sara >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 4:56:00 AM
yes flowing freely, but not psycholy-like anxiety
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:50:00 PM
That must be a sight to see, your poem here does it good justice, nice write..Thanks on Brain Washing, as you say, Satan know every trick,and I believe he is thinking of more..Danny
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Date: 1/2/2010 11:15:00 AM
Wonderful analogy here, Sara. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Sara and if for Brian's contest entry ..good luck.. beautiful images here and expressive lines... enjoyed reading.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:45:00 AM
I love this one! Thanks for commenting on my "Just a Dream" poem. I'm a beginner, so all comments are helpful. Steve
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:19:00 AM
Another of your wonderful writes here Sara...very thought provoking and filled with a powerful message. Love the metaphors. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments. All is deeply appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:18:00 AM
Sara, unique percpective. Like the title. Keep writing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/2/2010 4:04:00 AM
Love the title of this poem, nice work...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2010 3:49:00 AM
So true! Thanks for the reminder.
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