Emerald Eyed Beauty

Complexion delight, Emerald eyed maiden glows; Dark haired beauty wows. http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

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Charlene Bird

Date: 6/18/2009 9:50:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku dear James, The dark haired beuty who captured your heart. Lovely!

Zach Aurel Henderson

Date: 6/15/2009 10:32:00 AM

wow... this poem is far beyod my work... fantastic write... and my computer is dumb so i cant check my soup mail

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/7/2009 4:47:00 AM

James, Of course I enjoyed this poem. Why? Because I can really identify with the WOW in this poem. When I was a girl, I loved dark haired people. Dad had dark hair and blue eyes. My brother had green eyes. His hair turned brown later in life. That combination is genetically rare as is blonde hair and brown eyes. I have a cousin like that. My eyes are brown as is my hair. Not black like "Snow White" I'm rambling and smiling big... Have a super day James. Lovingly, Dane

Date: 6/6/2009 5:57:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme and imagery for an interesting view. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Enjoy the rest of the weekend! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/6/2009 12:06:00 PM

Nice work James, compelling and concise...Raul

Stefania Carmen Misaila

Date: 6/6/2009 11:35:00 AM

oh :">! don't tell me it's about me, now?

Nathan Leccese

Date: 6/6/2009 11:32:00 AM

Beautiful James! Great choice of words here. Nate