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Embracing Autumn

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It’s now time when fiery leaves fall on the ground, I remember you my love, Wish you’re here hanging with me around On this blissful moment, a fiery love begins under these deciduous trees hold me close once again, sun shines in my eyes forever , a love unrivalled to any other each single leaf touches my skin, eases my tearful longing and pain autumn season stands, all sweet memories of you deep in my heart remain..... each leaf cascades like bright shooting star on endless days and nights you’re touching my heart as each swirls gracefully in sight here they are, I catch them one by one as they gently fall like the time you catch me too, I felt so great , thrilling ...so amazing and wonderful I bask in this autumn delight alone colors shed my tears, wipe them all in assurance that one day you’ll be home ©2014Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved 10/10/2014

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/12/2015 10:00:00 AM

You have written a poem of beautiful shape and sincerity. Well done. Chok Dee Krap.

Len Gasun
Date: 11/14/2015 9:12:00 AM

Kap khon ka mak mak naka. Chook Dee duai naka. Sawatdika.

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/6/2015 4:48:00 AM

Beautiful, both the shape and the content! You can try entering this in that Old Poem contest, Leo. PS. Belated happy birthday! Good health, more blessings, more time with your loved ones and the best that life can offer - my prayer for you! Sorry, I wasn't around yesterday. Go to Anne-Lise's page, she has a surprise for you there. Big hugs!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 10:09:00 AM

Oh, thank you so much my very dear friend, Kim. But I cannot find the contest. Anway, it's ok my very dear friend and kabayan. Thank you so much for your loving greetings and wishes. I've been to our dear Anne Lise's page already. Thank you, thank you sooo much. Many hugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2015 6:59:00 PM

Wow what a wonderful leaf shaped poem I LOVE it:-) :-) hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Jan for your precious time stopping by and for loving my humble write. Many hugs, back at you!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/5/2015 4:27:00 PM

Very lovely poem Leonora and a Happy Birthday!!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Tim! Many hugs to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2015 3:55:00 PM

It's an old one? Well, it is really awesome! Happy birthday AGAIN. Is your day over? Here it is only half finished!~!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 11:16:00 AM

Yes, my very dear friend Andrea. I wrote it before but didn't post it coz i was so lazy to fix the form. Thank you so much for reading and your birthday greetings! Many hugs to you!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2015 2:51:00 PM

Each falling leaf revives a memory...autumn's romantic touch! A really delightful shape poem, Leonora! ~~ If I'm not mistaken it's also your birthday....many happy returns:) May you bask in autumn's delight. Hugs // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 11:29:00 AM

Thank you so much for lovingly visiting my poem and your very encouraging feedback my very dear friend, Paul. Yes, it was my very dear friend. It was last Monday here. Thank you thank you so much for your greetings and wishes! Many hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2015 12:17:00 PM

- A lovely poem written in an autumn leaf, unique and wonderful, dear Leonora - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 11:25:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest Anne Lise for reading my old poem. Many hugs to you!

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/5/2015 11:09:00 AM

What a magnificent shape poem about the lovely romance of autumn, Leonora! I really enjoyed your most excellent write, a 7!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 11:26:00 AM

Thank you thank you so much for your precious time reading and enjoying my experimental poem my dear friend, Laura and your very inspiring comments and rating! Many hugs to you!