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Embrace the Lines

I embrace the line of fleeting moments Seated on the wings of homeward pelicans Where the setting sun still waves to say Orange goodbyes until tomorrow At my window lines of sounds From fleeting words of your coffee Seek few lines of a short term station Embracing them is a great temptation The line of children on the road To board their school bus in the morning I embrace their line and go back Sixty years in a lovely time tube In your whispering lines’ embrace The crimson cascading awareness ______________________________________ June 29, 2016

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Date: 6/30/2016 1:59:00 PM
Excellent write! love the way you said "Orange goodbyes".
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/30/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thank you ... there is orange in all goodbyes ...
Date: 6/29/2016 7:49:00 PM
True poetry, Probir. Very vivid imagery. Excellent write! Good luck in contest, this should do well.
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