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Embers of Love

My golden eve gleams ebullient sun beams When flares of fantasies in your eyes blaze As echoes of fervor whisper your dreams Where sensual concert in your heart plays Hold me my dear in passions of your heart And hear voice of desires crooning your name As message of warmth blazing souls impart Where embers of romance ignite our flame Oh! how does the moon know I love you so And why do the heavens behold your glance While vows of our love in gleeful winds blow And dazzling your sight euphoric stars dance Your answer my love in the moonlight glows How fondly you told them, it’s me you chose October 18, 2020 Placed 1st: Love sonnet poetry contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Placed 1st: Completely your choice (30) by Brian Strand Placed 1st: Your best 2020 sonnet contest by John Hamilton

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/25/2021 6:21:00 PM

Beautiful, Vijay ~ so happy to find this lovely sonnet published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/4/2021 2:42:00 PM

Once again Vijay, you do not disappoint with your beautiful imagery :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

John Hamilton

Date: 1/4/2021 8:50:00 AM

This is still one of my faves, congrats Vijay on another win with this beauty!

Valerie Staton

Date: 11/21/2020 6:48:00 AM

This is such a beautifully written poem! A FAVE for sure!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/30/2020 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Valerie.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/19/2020 2:38:00 PM

those embers really shine like a dream in your pen vijay a very beautifully painted picture in words wishing you a blessed weekend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/30/2020 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Liam.

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/5/2020 6:02:00 PM

Ahh, tender love, how sweet sweet it is. Vijay, simply sweet love :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2020 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Akkina.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/26/2020 9:20:00 AM

Hi Vijay, a powerful love story with much emotion and passion in it and your imagination is par excellence in this breathtaking poem. Beautiful Vijay, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/26/2020 9:22:00 AM

And congratulations my dear friend on your win in the contest, I am not surprised! Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Galia

Date: 10/23/2020 5:55:00 AM

Heartiest Congratulations Vijayji on your win..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thank you Vijay--much appreciate.

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2020 5:08:00 AM

Such a beautiful sonnet of love, dear Vijay. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2020 5:21:00 AM

Thank you Elaine--much appreciate.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2020 6:13:00 AM

Imagery, love and romance combine to produce a delightful result, Vijay. Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2020 8:56:00 AM

Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

John Lawless

Date: 10/20/2020 12:56:00 PM

Love those "embers of romance" Vijay, nicely done

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/21/2020 6:00:00 AM

Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/20/2020 6:03:00 AM

Vijay, this is such a beautiful, romantic sonnet. I love it! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/19/2020 8:40:00 PM

"Where embers of romance ignite our flame" And that is how it should be. This is so beautiful and romantic. I see that congratulations are in order. Your words belong in the spotlight. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/20/2020 6:26:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend your visit and kind remarks--many thanks, as always.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/19/2020 12:09:00 PM

A lovely, charming love sonnet Vijay, told in a most heart warming way. Congratulations on the win, Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Belle--much appreciate your visit and comments.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/19/2020 10:55:00 AM

An excellent write congrats Vijay on a top win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 1:46:00 PM

Much appreciate John--your comments mean a lot. Many thanks for holding contests.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2020 7:29:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate, as always.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 10/19/2020 3:21:00 AM

VJ.. when the contest was sonnet you were right on it those embers still burn where your pen is concerned you kindled those hearts to set the night on fire!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 6:16:00 AM

Haven't seen much of you lately, Chuck. Many thanks for the kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/19/2020 2:04:00 AM

I agree with Victor, this sonnet is superb, Vijay:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 6:15:00 AM

Much appreciate Jo--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2020 10:53:00 PM

Super sonnet. You expressed love and romance in such beautiful and dazzling imagery. Luck for the top place. ~~

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 6:15:00 AM

Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/18/2020 6:51:00 PM

Wow, awesome sonnet, Vijay, will do well in contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 6:14:00 AM

Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/18/2020 5:19:00 PM

This is a beautiful Sonnet! So well written Vijay! Excellent :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/19/2020 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/18/2020 3:36:00 PM

WoW! You’ve such a well written love Sonnet. Your pen paints a lovely picture. I got lost in each line. Nice rhythm and flow. Good rhymes and content as well. It was very poetic as well. Looks like a top contender to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/18/2020 3:43:00 PM

So very kind of you to say so, Alexis. Enjoyed reading your comments. Much appreciate--Many thanks, as always.