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Embers Burn In Silence

Embers burn in silence not to disturb our softly spoken words and to gift us little warmth in love's nest Once more in your embrace in front of fire sole witness of our love making the moment stand still eternal © kash poet ============000============= Placement: 2nd ;(Nov.2012) Contest:Views from a Vignette Sponsor:Nette Onclaud ##vignette: a hexastich in 6 lines with 2-4-4-6-7-3 syllable count per line, unrhymed.. there are a few approaches of this genre, but let’s go for the short version… a vignette focuses on ONE mood, character, setting, or object to paint a picture of a moment in time in a SUBTLE MANNER… please use the visual below as your thematic concept… ======================================================

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Date: 12/1/2012 2:31:00 PM
What a wonderful scene! so charming! Light & Love
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Date: 11/17/2012 8:40:00 AM
What a peaceful poem. It brings back fond memories of sitting by a fire.
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:54:00 AM
Kash, CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:43:00 AM
Hey, I thought I had viewed this winners list but I don't see my congrats for you. CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 11/9/2012 8:03:00 PM
I loved this romantic take on the contest......much more hopeful, and not as sad as my own!! But it's lovely to share the spot with you....Hooray for that!!
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Date: 11/9/2012 7:56:00 PM
SUPER CONGRATS KASH ON A FABULOUS WIN FOR A MESMERIZING WRITE LUV .. I AM STILL HAVING SO MANY PROBLEMS COMMENTING BACK TO ALL POETS LUV .. TPS WORKING ON IT .. TOO SLOW FOR ME ..HAHA
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Date: 11/9/2012 12:22:00 PM
Congrats Kash. Eternal warmth in a moment. Love it. :) Tanya
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Date: 11/9/2012 11:56:00 AM
Soft spoken winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2012 8:01:00 AM
Dreamy..etheral as are so many of your writes, you are one lucky man. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/9/2012 8:00:00 AM
Another superb win, congratulations Kash xx
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Date: 11/9/2012 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2012 9:03:00 PM
Well, that little ember of a piece definably warmed ME up. ;) I gottah say, I really enjoyed reading some of your work today. Thanks for stopping by to read one of my poems! Means a lot. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/7/2012 11:22:00 AM
Kash, I just love the scene you bring forth here, got me all smiles here. I will try and change the avatar in the morning ;)
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Date: 11/6/2012 12:30:00 PM
Reads like a winning Vignette..Of course, I am not sure about the correctness on one...Very passionate work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by...Your presence at my ork is always uplifting.Sara
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Date: 11/6/2012 7:38:00 AM
everything is normal again. WHEWWW
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Date: 11/5/2012 11:24:00 PM
Kash, I lost my member area and ALL my soupmails and I am unable to post to blogs or to post a poem. What's up?? Do you still have your functions here? I feel really helpless not being able to post blogs or poems.
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Date: 11/5/2012 5:41:00 PM
are you in the north pole... appear!..:) huggs, kashi!
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Date: 11/5/2012 3:37:00 PM
so beautiful, Kash, sure to be in the winners' circle. My time is limited these days, but I'm doing my best and I feel bad I might not get to all my replies today! Have a great new week. Luv, andrea
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:35:00 AM
A lovely vignette. There is something mesmerizing about watching the embers die.
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Date: 11/5/2012 1:22:00 AM
lovely poem Kash, enjoyed...
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Date: 11/4/2012 1:49:00 PM
love this beautiful write, Kash
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Date: 11/4/2012 12:14:00 PM
Lovely and sweet poetry kash - Luck in contest !!! Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2012 10:27:00 AM
Very well worded and amazing imagery Kash!
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Date: 11/4/2012 10:10:00 AM
The embers may be silent but the Poem speaks volumes. Well done.
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Date: 11/4/2012 9:57:00 AM
nicely written Kash
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