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Embers

~~~~ It's late at night, the television off. The fire burns low and the room grows cool On the mantelpiece an old clock ticking loudly can be heard above the soft crackling of the dying fire. The embers fall and ash spills on the hearth. One the clock strikes it's chime. The old woman sits in the armchair drinking from a lukewarm cup of tea made earlier unwilling to disturb the cat curled like a furry ball on her knee. She will go to bed soon, but not just yet. ~~~~ 11th. September 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/4/2014 2:08:00 AM
Nicely paINTED PICTURE WITH WORDS, CONGRATS, mARGArET
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Date: 10/3/2014 11:45:00 PM
I just really love this one. could read you forever, sweetie . You are so good!! Congrats on the win.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 10/4/2014 4:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, take care.
Date: 10/3/2014 9:16:00 PM
I didn't see you peeking into my window at my kitty and me. You certainly got it right. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Margaret Foster
Date: 10/4/2014 4:13:00 AM
Thank you Joyce. Nothing better than to curl up in front of the fire with the cat and a cup of tea.
Date: 10/3/2014 8:28:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you painted Margaret. So lovely. Congratulations on your win.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 10/4/2014 4:15:00 AM
Many thanks Brenda
Date: 10/3/2014 8:21:00 PM
This is beautiful, Margaret. I really enjoyed the imagery. Congrats.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 10/4/2014 4:16:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 10/3/2014 6:58:00 PM
a poem of many layers that could spin in so many directions contentment, loneliness, resignation. Margaret a great pen congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs
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Margaret Foster
Date: 10/4/2014 4:19:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, I am pleased you saw fit to include my effort among the great poets who entered some excellent work.
Date: 10/3/2014 6:48:00 PM
A very creative write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:34:00 PM
wonderful imagery Margaret i especially love the ending with the cold tea and the comfy cat:-) many congrats on your win. hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/20/2014 2:05:00 AM
This is a really cool form, and done quite nicely!! And thank you for the encouraging words! I've never thought much of my writing so it's incredibly uplifting, so again thank you!
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:02:00 AM
I DO love a good etheree, and you have delivered!! A simple scene painted to perfection!!
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Date: 9/11/2014 11:44:00 AM
Well crafted Etheree, good luck, Margaret
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Date: 9/11/2014 11:13:00 AM
A great etheree, Margaret. good luck. Love, Joyce
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