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For a time I've been writing as the stream idles by as dust storms are rolling, across a faraway sky while sheep are a'bleating; as the cattle lie low as I'm writing I'm watching, the white falling snow it drops down in silence, from the dark coloured sky I feel distanced, from the home that I'm holding here in my minds eye..! © Joe Maverick 09-01-2010

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Date: 4/18/2018 5:52:00 PM
Lonely, yet beautifully serene it seems. What was on your mind for this one Joe ...I wonder.
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Date: 4/19/2018 5:48:00 AM
:) ...so very very true. Thank you Joe.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 4/19/2018 12:34:00 AM
Hello F J, past times and nostalgia were part of my thoughts, and yet man ever craves that perfect time/place either past or future, that will not be is achievable however.. my conjecture is people realise heaven is the only place happiness exists yet cannot be there so always are searching.'
Date: 1/20/2014 10:53:00 PM
third time at THIS one. Most of yours I have seen at least twice or three times now! This was one of your best, Joe!
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Date: 1/7/2013 5:39:00 PM
here is one that I really liked from before! Hi, Joe. just dropping by!
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Date: 8/9/2012 1:21:00 PM
Nice double, Joe - two lonely scenes. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:22:00 PM
I can feel the spirit of looking for that heavenly home..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2012 1:54:00 PM
Oh those snow flakes, how their seemingly innocent little opaque faces can make one "feel distanced", Joe! They're quiet, but boy, can they wreck havoc! They had certainly stoked your own "EMBERLIGHT" with this write! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:59:00 AM
one of my favs!! greatness came to you!
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:36:00 PM
this is very nice, joe. It seems like you are a cowboy or something! I enjoyed reading this. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/2/2010 2:20:00 PM
Well expressed thoughts on Emberlight, really impressive, Joe
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