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Elves of the Reaper

I awoke this morning To a brand new day The sun was shining Neighbourhood children played Then i heard on the news That made my hair stand on end The Reapers elves To our world they descend Dressed in black These creatures of death To take earths life It's very last breath With them he marches Dictating who dies Enrolling the weak As he casts his eyes First Toronto and Buffalo Near these beautiful falls Cities, towns and villages In darken deathly maul They reach Albany Near route 87 Many people are praying As they look towards heaven They are now in their thousands As they walk with the dead The discarded are left In bloodied stained shreds Our countries are in cry For a saviour so strong To turn this dark evil to right Cast them out, to where they came from Semaj is summoned Once again From his Kingdom in the Highlands Master of, the Mountains and Glens With Etto his droid New York they reach To call up the followers In world wide preach He summons the Knights And hero's of old To rise for the right And join his fold In Churches and Cathedrals All throughout our nations Burial vaults are opening Civilisations salvation Even the gargoyles Leave their resting places To join the fold Their faces now grace us To the North of New York The old and the new stand To rid this evil From our righteous free lands The Reaper cries Hell is for hero's As King Richard replies Hell is for zero's Both armies clash In bloodied spoil But there's no spill of red On this free countries soil Where all around Lie fallen elves The Reaper on his knees For this is where he fell Semaj stands over This evil of the dark With his claymore he strikes We are now worlds apart The clean up begins As they are gathered en-mass With the divine waters This evil has passed The very next day All the old hero's have returned To their place of rest For on this day they have earned Nations stood together To fight all evil, as one The corner has been turned A new world has begun http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-10.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/14/2009 8:56:00 PM
Great write as ALWAYS Mister man!!!! You NEVER cease to AMAZE me and you are one of my favorite poets on here, just so ya know!!! Thanks for all your comments I cherish them sweetie....Love Aleera
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Date: 12/11/2009 2:56:00 AM
Wow! One of your best James, your talent is really shining in this piece. Well deserving piece to make the hot list. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/6/2009 1:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this very much. Great metaphor!
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Date: 12/3/2009 2:02:00 PM
Superbly written and much truth in it of the "end of days" scenario....great rhythm and masterful rhyme...thanks for sharing James~Mary
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:32:00 PM
would good exsist without evil? Light & Love
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:51:00 AM
Semaj has quite a perspective on the workings of the "dark angels," James. This was a fantastic write, probably with more truth than we'd care to believe. Hope you are feeling better! Much love to my favorite Highlander, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:23:00 AM
Great imagination!!! great write, love Simone
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:39:00 PM
Gripping Write Mr. Fraser!!! An applause here from an audiance member for this poetic write !!!!! Bravo ! james
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:15:00 PM
Soup Mail, James...
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:19:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! thanks for the comments and support! Hugs, Robin
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:18:00 AM
This one is so neat.I like it alot.You have mail.
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:51:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest James.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/29/2009 2:19:00 PM
Great poem James. Thanks for your comments. Pam
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Date: 11/29/2009 1:46:00 PM
James, I have responded to Carol;s blog on the pending issue at hand if u care to read and comment... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 11/29/2009 11:13:00 AM
Have a beautiful day and thank you for posting your fantastic poetry here for us to read James. Enjoyed. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/29/2009 7:56:00 AM
Arise Semaj with the Knights and hurry and get to the White House .. we need action quickly and since these dark elves are now destroyed and on hiatus send them quickly please to destroy the evil elves plaguing this USA .. so much... thankxxx James for this tremendous tale .. reminded me of King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table.. conquering heroes ... luv your heroes and zeros line .. wonderful .. read on my new postings.. luv.. "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:13:00 AM
Good fun write, never easy to do these, have tried myself some time back. Well done, very creative...keep your pen dancing...Anna-Marie
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Date: 11/29/2009 4:42:00 AM
Wild imagination in this tale. There will be a day where evil will be overcome and a new heaven and a new earth will be ruled by Christ the Holy One. Your tale reminded me of this. Keep the magical pen flowing. SK
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Date: 11/28/2009 11:25:00 PM
Usualli i like the elves but i dont like these dark elves..yet with unity we can fight all evil i guess and come out as Hero;s ..i love how you can create a message even from a fantasy story..indeed clever--Charma
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Date: 11/28/2009 9:19:00 PM
Fascinating write, of a spiritual nature, and I love it. Unity is the key, isn't it? No evil can stand the power of unity. Enjoyed your poem, James. Great work! Thank you for sharing and thank you for the nice reviews on my latest poems. Love and blessings to you and yours, Caroline.
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Date: 11/28/2009 8:56:00 PM
Well, I think you did not wake up, but dreamed a fantastic dream to share with us, and it kinda gave me chills...
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Date: 11/28/2009 5:57:00 PM
strange but entertaining, I wrote a poem inspired by you poem farm girl-it is about when I met my husband.
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