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Elven Astronaut

Flying from the Middle Ages to the 21st Century An astronaut passes through amber clouds on his way here Leaving behind ancient ceremonies He strives to capture the new found sensations which have touched all of us in this the "computer age" Leaping across this blue earth he tastes the reality we've all learned to live with Dancing on thin ice He becomes one with the asphalt homeland you'll know him when you see him He is respendent in a silver uniform covered with flecks of gold which reflect the light from our source of life the brillant star we call the SUN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/25/2011 11:22:00 AM
thank you for your comment on Quite Little Child
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Date: 4/23/2011 10:06:00 PM
Hi, their Matt, how are you? me just got back on the soup the other day..lol.. youll be seeing more of me now... so Boo! lol.. by the way i love your poem its very clever.. with great discription....had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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Date: 4/22/2011 1:09:00 PM
very creative piece of fine poetry Matthew.
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:24:00 PM
A dazling account of Elven's journey, Matthew. This would have made a great entry for Deb's "surreal" or "sci-fi" contest! Have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:19:00 PM
Elegant write Matthew on the pride of the astronaut and his endeavors to conquer space.. this program is in dire straights right now but your poetry gives him personality and zest luv... enjoyed the dancing on thin ice line..thankxx for your wonderful comments on my positive personality piece.. hope it is catchy ... wishing u a most blessed and Happy Easter celehbration luv..
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:57:00 AM
Interesting work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:10:00 AM
This poem transcends me. Very imaginative
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:25:00 AM
time travel and mixing of the ages. Very cool. I remember you love fanatasy poetry. About my etheree on bad advertising, It wasn't meant to be a shape poem, but it is funny how it goes from thin to fat and that is what I am writing about. haha.
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Date: 4/12/2011 2:31:00 PM
A very different write i see. Well i enjoyed the read, Matthew
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Matthew. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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