Ellip Who

#1 I sustain sweet smile how bout you? #2 mundane night in the dark my desk light Ellip Contest 3-3-13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:32:00 AM

sweet stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/22/2013 12:09:00 AM

Very interesting haiku work (the second was my favorite... even if rhymes feel somewhat strange in haiku). I haven't heard about the contest, but the "night owl" in me appreciates me the thoughts that went into writing this. Cool poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2013 2:58:00 AM

Like this haiku! - Well done! - (We think so well after nightfall, let your light burn.) - Luck in contest!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/13/2013 4:47:00 PM

Ok believe me I know what you are saying here a late night trying to write. and you just can't sleep right until you finish. good right it reminds to pick up a new light bulb my went out.

Len Gasun

Date: 3/13/2013 8:32:00 AM

Hello my dear friend and libramate! I'm so glad to read this amazing poem of yours. i love it so much and the form. Thank you so much for sharing again your gem! Thank you also for my awesome placement again in your contest. I'm greatly honored! Thank you so much! Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora