Elixir

Send me elixir back and bless me with the rain The fruits of the sacred tree and the ointments of pain

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Date: 8/12/2021 8:23:00 AM

I don't want the pain but I have my share of it. Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Aamy Khan
Date: 8/14/2021 12:21:00 AM

Thank you so much dear.sara

Date: 8/12/2021 8:13:00 AM

lovely ~ congrats

Aamy Khan
Date: 8/14/2021 12:21:00 AM

Thanks alot dear

Date: 8/7/2021 11:10:00 AM

I echo Kim: Wonderful (and congrats)

Aamy Khan
Date: 8/8/2021 1:46:00 AM

Thanks alot dear

Date: 8/7/2021 9:13:00 AM

Wonderful! Congrats!

Aamy Khan
Date: 8/8/2021 1:47:00 AM

Thanks alot dear

Date: 8/7/2021 8:00:00 AM

Exceptional write! Congratulations. All the best, Brian

Aamy Khan
Date: 8/7/2021 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much

Date: 8/7/2021 6:38:00 AM

Has Shakespearean touch. Congratulations on your win!

Aamy Khan
Date: 8/7/2021 8:29:00 AM

Thanks alot