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A busy road. A tree stump. An old man. Everyday at eight 'o clock He sits there, cane tapping just watching cars go by-- I among them Such a lonely man I say to myself Same busy road. Same tree stump. Same old man. He looks up, cane twirling and smiles at me in that split second I smile back A roadside friend is gained. Same busy road. Same tree stump. Different old man. Day after day He waves hi--cane dancing Smiling I wave goodbye, no time to stop Same busy road Same tree stump No old man I screech to a halt Ask of his absence Clutching a piece of paper found taped on his cane I weep in my car and send a prayer of thanks to my roadside friend Eleven words Changed my world. "Thank you lady in the blue car. You make my day." Same busy road. Same tree stump. Different me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/12/2020 9:59:00 PM
Hi, nikko, just catching up with my favourite poems, loved this before, and it gets better with age. Stay safe where ever you are...
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:58:00 PM
everything is same in changing at last event /// wonderful poem
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Date: 12/30/2012 4:42:00 AM
nikko this is amazing..and boy it really shows as a lovely human being,, i truly relate to this poem, have a happy new year,, i miss you here.......Harry..oh to my fav this gem goes!!~!~!
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Date: 2/27/2012 3:15:00 PM
ps...what a cutie pic of you...cutie cutie cutie!!!!
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Date: 2/27/2012 3:13:00 PM
Nikko...the birthday gal...I absolutely love the message you portrayed in this poem..this is the kind of person we should all strive to be..just here to make the best of each day striving to encourage others with simple gestures along the way. This ole fella with his dancing cane really touched my heart in a profound way. I appreciate the simplicity of your poem and its message. This is what I call GREAT POETRY!! I am printing it off and placing it in my fav notebook. Your soup mail made my eyes leak..you are just like the ole man touching others lives along the way!!
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Touched" contest Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:09:00 PM
congrats Nikko on an HM for quality poetry sweet friend ..luv..
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:23:00 AM
This is awesome, nikko! You sure have a thing for tree stumps, don't you? Really like the end of the poem and such an great story with a great message behind it. Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 10/17/2010 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2010 3:16:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your win in P.D.'s contest.. awesome poem which I always liked and glad it won now.. enjoy your win with luv my friend..
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:02:00 PM
wow! you used this in two contest..lol.. that was cool,,, later,..p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:01:00 PM
weeee! Another one from you..lol.. hey now I remember which poem i thought was yours,,lol,, Andrea's because of the title. Sounds like soemthing you would title like that. By the way, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun reading your entry and selecting this fine poem for my contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on your win in P.D.'s contest " Any Poem Goes* Any Poem"". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:51:00 PM
A lovely poem and a worthy win. congratulations on your 2nd place win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/19/2010 12:05:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your 2nd place win in the contest.. I read this one before and its a rarer beauty now..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/19/2010 11:47:00 AM
Wow! What a wonderful story. Good life message. Congratulations on your second place finish in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy this success. I wish you many more. Karen
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Date: 4/19/2010 9:44:00 AM
Oh...that last line melted me!! What an awesome way to end this wonderful poem of kindness!! Congratulations!!!!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/19/2010 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko on this fine poem's second place, Enjoy, Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:45:00 AM
How moving, Nikko! I love the way this old man impacted your life and you his. Congratulations on your victory in Dane Ann's contest with this wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:52:00 AM
A wonderful and touching poem here, dear Nikko. I have a similar situation. Everytime I drive back to my home I see this old man walk holding a tall cane and when he sees my car he looks inside especially to wave and smile at me. We never talked butwe...communicate :) Congrats.
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:44:00 PM
Nikko, this beautiful poem moved me to tears. It was written with the insight of a compassionate soul who was the little angel in someone's life. You are an angel Nikko, and this poem proves it! I loved it and will put it in my fav's. Love, Connie P.S. Thanks also for your comments on my poems.
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:53:00 AM
Thank you, Nikko, for your most welcomed recent comments on my “Whether in Your Neck of the Woods” blog. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/11/2010 8:16:00 AM
Wow! We have a man in our time that sits, waves, and hold up a sign that says, "You have just been prayed for" And I think he does it. I enjoyed your poem. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:52:00 AM
well, nowhere else to see a new poem of yours. Just stopping to thank you so much for your comments to me. I was inspired by Dane's contest to do TWO chicken poems. I am not using the "dark" one you read. haha. The one below it is the one in the contest. HOpe you have been inspired today to write MOER poems to add up here for us to read, NIkko! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this touching deep poem Nikko..Good job..Charma
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