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elevator's doors silently close shut mirrored stainless steel immaculate woman dabs tears in reflection

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Date: 3/26/2015 11:46:00 PM
this is so interesting. Makes me want to know more about "dad's tears"
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:34:00 AM
amazing pivot you got here, sara... very finely done.. thanks for being part of your recent contest.. huggs
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Date: 3/25/2015 7:04:00 PM
very very clever tanka good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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