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Elevator Ride

Walking down a long corridor In the hosiptal on the first floor Just going to visit a friend Hoping for him its not the end A person in gray in same hallway Coming from the opposite Side, enter the elevator With us he abides Going up he ask us I am planning on that When my eyes clear I see that EMS shirt he wears Just making small converstion He ask if we are all right I say yes, why are you Looking for customers tonight (Sorta of Rhyme)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 4:25:00 AM
Thank you for sharing with us Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:33:00 PM
Cute poem, enjoyed the read....Sam
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:48:00 PM
funny, good one!
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Date: 9/8/2009 11:51:00 AM
hehehe like it
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:17:00 AM
you make me laugh with a mouthful of coffee........o
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