Elements Part 4: Fire
ELEMENTS Part 4: Fire Contest
Sponsor: Brian Davey
Flames of distraction feeding my hunger
Inspires me ‘til the rain causes thunder
Rousing on a chilled night during autumn
Elegant candles, so glad you brought em’
Kindle of Venus gleaming in my heart,
shimmering endeavor, hands lighting sparks,
flares unbearable with passionate hands,
seems like our blazing glint has changed our plans.
Burning shimmers with a kiss on my cheek,
your ignition remains to make me weak,
our dazzling glow connects my soul to yours,
do you think we should take this fire indoors?
You’ve inspired my core to scorch with desire,
baby, thanks for seething me with your fire.
Sonnet Syllables: Ten syllables per line
checked at: howmanysyllables.com
Total # of syllables: 140 syllables
Total # of words: 101
Date Written: April 18, 2016
Copyright © Lu Loo | Year Posted 2016
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