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Earth wakes in the spring with new sprouting grain After brittle white frost, or slush under rain We can see gold arise, where the wheat fields were sown and the hills are ablaze with a honeycomb loam I can see quivering trees, and stiff shocks of corn The amber of the noon, and the warm curl of hay The fragrant smell of earth, of green moss and peat Where tangled bent grass and willows will lean A muddy bank falls, by the winding rock creek and the dampness has called us to soon wash our feet Our blanket is spread upon the spring meadow's girth As we drink up the peace of the sweet scented earth ________________________ 3/15/16 For Elements of Earth Contest

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:37:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2016 3:39:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/17/2016 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win and placement, Carrie!
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Connie:)
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:03:00 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Carrie... big congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 9:45:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/17/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Brian, it was a great theme!!
Date: 3/16/2016 2:45:00 AM
Another Wow From me Carrie, I had a feeling from the first line that this poem would end spectacularly and boy did it! #7 I love this beauty Carrie...took me back to Kansas. Hugs, Connie
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:30:00 PM
wow, beautiful
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