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Speak now for the sea, ancient bard that guides me. Be the voice of its wisdom, washing away my tears. Raise me and lower me, like an endless wave, seen and then unseen, but always remaining present. Speak now for the wind that blows our seeds. Give it voice so it may be heard by passing souls, from one generation to the next, may its sound be gentle with caution and deep sorrow. Speak now for the frantic fire that cleanses its crackling voice kills tree bark to be reborn from speckled skin discarded like a serpent's husk Phoenix, rising high in all its burning glory Speak now for the earth that sucks our feet in and licks with tongues along Lethe's banks here I will rest, and watch with breaking eyes the beauty of the universe above me *** Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White December 3 2017

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Date: 3/6/2018 11:29:00 PM
An outstanding collaboration! You two have done awesomely!
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Date: 12/24/2017 10:16:00 PM
A great collaboration and tribute to the four elements. I can tell who wrote which verse and yet they meld together so seamlessly. Congrats!
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Date: 12/8/2017 12:27:00 PM
Darren, I'm in love with this craft. More ink please.
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Date: 12/6/2017 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful weave
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Date: 12/6/2017 10:42:00 AM
- A talented writing from two wonderful poets - Bravo, Darren and White Wolf ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2017 12:13:00 AM
This is so amazing you guys, even if as a Bard I realize you missed the fifth glass, of Scotch!
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:20:00 AM
LOL Art, hey psst, four glasses are more than enough.
Date: 12/3/2017 9:41:00 PM
A beautiful colaboration - each element so eloquently voiced. This is a fave! :) <3
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:20:00 AM
Thanks my friend <3
Date: 12/3/2017 6:09:00 PM
Fabulous elemental poem, well done you two. Fave.
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:19:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, also for the fav!
Date: 12/3/2017 6:05:00 PM
All is good in the universe today, I managed to login! LOL... So much fun writing with such a talented soul as yourself, Duir! I think this is one of our best yet. ~~~/|\~~~
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:18:00 AM
LOL Budgie. And HAI! Loved working with you, you sent me an AWESOME opening to work with.
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:18:00 AM
nd yes, I agree, I think it's the very best we've ever written :)
Date: 12/3/2017 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations to the both of you. This poem is perfect. So well written. Excellent!! :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:17:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi
Date: 12/3/2017 11:54:00 AM
An outstanding poem! I particularly liked the last stanza
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:16:00 AM
Yay, Carole, love to see you here <3 and thanks.
Date: 12/3/2017 10:14:00 AM
I just knew this would be something outstanding, and I wasn't disappointed.
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Sunlite :)
Date: 12/3/2017 10:00:00 AM
wow Darren and White wolf I am blown away by your creativity this is absolutely awesome Every element is portrayed so superbly i especially love the fire and sea poems:-) Into my faves!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:15:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs :)
Date: 12/3/2017 9:56:00 AM
Oh a spectacular pen you guys. Two heads are better than one! Wonderful. xomo x2!
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:15:00 AM
Thanks my friend xoxo

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