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Elemental Love

Blue evening dress Topographical cleavage Nurturing mother Father Sky reigns high Soft touch on her horizon Her head covered with A wintery Arctic scarf With white pumps to match He caresses her His radiant passion flames Heating up her womb Encompassing her with love Warm and cold climatic touch His breath cools her skin Tenderly moistening earth Life springs from within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/21/2010 8:55:00 PM
This is just so very lovely, Robb...made even more so after studying the Rengay form and realizing that you and Christi wrote it together. Congratulations to you both on your well-deserved win. ...and thank you (I think) for your comment on my "Dream" poem. Can't say I really understood what you meant, but I do appreciate your taking the trouble to write. That it drew me over to check out your work and find this one was worth all the puzzling over what you said. ;-)
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Date: 3/21/2010 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Robb. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in this contest Robb. Agape Moses
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Date: 3/18/2010 6:29:00 PM
What a great team you have made in writing this poem! Congratulations!! Enjoy your win !!Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/18/2010 3:21:00 PM
Congrats Robb on your winning collaboration poem with Christi .. a wonderful win and placement for both of u ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/10/2010 8:55:00 PM
i see you ans cristi are a team? guessing for the contest? good luck :D
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