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I stand here looking out across the land At sun kissed pineapple plants row by row. Green tops on red earth outwardly expand. Rich volcanic soil filtered throughout time Has grown many harvests of sugarcane; Papayas, lychee, and mangos sublime. These islands are a melting pot of souls Who love to surf and swim in waltzing waves, Laze in lagoons protected by sea shoals. Steep sweeping mountains overlook the sea With climbing trials that lead up to hill tops, As Earth gives birth to every plant and tree. From precious gems and metals that abound, To minerals and herbs to make us well, We are blessed by Earth's bounty from the ground. Rising Earth began with islands, you know? As steaming lava flows toward the sea, Hawaiians feel honor watching Earth grow. Contest Element Earth Part 1 Sponsor Brian Davey March 13, 2016 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:36:00 PM
Connie, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2016 3:24:00 PM
Hi Connie, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. An excellent write as always Connie. You do live in a blessed place on the Earth, but like all places, through the ages cement and concrete. Yet now the islands live in Mother Natures beauty. Your words sing out a lullaby of the islands in their beauty. This write is ever worthy of a seven Connie.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/23/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely comment Victor. I appreciate the seven my friend! ; )
Date: 3/17/2016 8:33:00 AM
Too good, Connie! You've written a gem!
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Date: 3/17/2016 3:03:00 AM
Hi Connie. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:35:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Connie:)
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:01:00 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win dear Connie... big congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 9:56:00 PM
Lovely imagery and tribute to these beautiful islands on our dear Earth, Connie. Congratulations on our placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/16/2016 9:44:00 PM
Connie, congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/17/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement Brian. I have been enjoying all the wonderful entries. Cheers, Connie
Date: 3/13/2016 11:29:00 PM
Connie, how beautifully you describe what you see in your island paradise! I just love the Hawaiian islands, and it feels like I'm right there when I read this! Great job and good luck in the contest :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/13/2016 11:51:00 PM
I wrote this from memory and then searched for a photo to match it. I am so thankful to google and finding just the perfect picture. By the way, this photo is Maui and I live on the island of Oahu. Thank you very much for your lovely comment Laura. ; )

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