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Elegiac Memories of Dear Mother

Dear Mother—I longed for your love: so when you passed away I wept; as your spirit rose up above my stinging tears, which were inept, flowed as we began to remove your cold, silent corpse as it slept—. Days passed—they gathered for your wake, a soothing time that was not sad or grave as they tried for my sake to pay their respects and act glad: as you laid there (to never take a breath again), I could’ve gone mad! The hour arrived—the funeral took place on a cold, wintry morn as if dream-like, strange and surreal. Distraught, I felt bereaved and torn as the last rites and burial left me forlorn—oh so forlorn!

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Date: 1/10/2015 1:18:00 PM
We lost my mother at age 93, and felt so blessed to have her with us for such a long life. She was a treasure, so I do share your grief. But writing about Mother has helped a great deal to distill and wash the grief away, or at least to soften it.
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Date: 6/27/2014 1:40:00 PM
This is such a deep powerful write! Well done! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/27/2014 9:42:00 AM
you have the element down pat...apprehensive come to mind
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