Eleemosynary Ubiquity

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sawed-off on the crimson emerald from a cloudy sky squeal and, at times, the reason low-slung why sparkles of a pearly salver modicum of encrusted damask mist befuddles me albeit moon, amber, and opalescence spawn a charming sight the perspective strikes each crevice of the flesh. and psyche advise shrouded in a cinereous cloud hapless and helpless, a glum-blue wolf growls out a bluesy bemoan. creating a lacuna of gallivant love touchstone leaden wails of anguish rhythmic echoed refrain plainchants of auric yearning reminiscent of challah aiming for eleemosynary seeds cahoots to germinate and thrive 2nd place contest winner Written: March 20, 2023 A Strand No 1201 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2023 7:46:00 PM

So wonderfully wrought Lasaad. I love the way you entwine words and images. So evocative and thoughtful! Congratulations on your wonderful win!! Easter blessings of joy!

Hat Bueckert

Date: 3/23/2023 8:19:00 AM

quite the wordsmith, this is beautifully written

Kabutha Hempstone

Date: 3/23/2023 4:30:00 AM

Your poem is a beautifully crafted work of art that evokes powerful emotions and imagery. Congratulations on your win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/22/2023 9:05:00 PM

I enjoyed learning some new words from this fantastic poem, with its stunning images, Lasaad. Congratulations on your win. :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/22/2023 8:10:00 PM

"modicum of encrusted damask mist", "cinereous cloud" - scenes and senses and emotions beautifully illustrated. Congratulations!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/21/2023 12:57:00 PM

Emlusenary sedentary hardly any...' See I have Flair too..' LOL))) look at that rhyme scheme Ya won't get many like that you kmow..' You do.? Well there is no call for that sort of response.! I Advise you to take'em while they're going for A song almost.' I mean its not often you get Others offering the very stuff of dreams to you Bad dreams..? Did I hear right or are my facultys Un.? Un un faculmalated? I give up I really do ' Btw I did like this piece..But just how do you Germinate cahoots.'

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2023 5:51:00 AM

Full of intrigue my friend. A winning poem you wrote.