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Below is the poem entitled ELECTRIC which was written by poet MERVIN SPENCE. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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The shack of the mind can cause separation from the time: mentally, spiritually, 
physically, socially, & psychologically.
Disappointment cramps the belly bottom causing emotional pain leaving all sorts of 
pain& strains, in the heart and brain

This causes tears in the eyes with out any water running down the face
“Why does the structure has to go through this kind of phase through the ears 
down to the soles?”
It’s hard to use words to let the tales that the body feels while the mind fails

You are the cause of this kind of feeling to be running through me veins because of 
the disappointments that disturb my heart and brain

With your high inspiration of words which left the heart, mind and soul. 
Then Buff, It would have felt better if you had clapped me with a stone.
The hardness of life has turned me into a stroll, in, up and down on the road. 

Disappointments attacks, every time another one tries to heal
But I will never give up because I want to know how success feels 
Even though, the pains in the heart and mind, still no heal.

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  1. Date: 3/26/2011 1:56:00 PM
    Nice narrative expressions on Electric, Mervin