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Electric

The shack of the mind can cause separation from the time: mentally, spiritually, physically, socially, & psychologically. Disappointment cramps the belly bottom causing emotional pain leaving all sorts of pain& strains, in the heart and brain This causes tears in the eyes with out any water running down the face “Why does the structure has to go through this kind of phase through the ears down to the soles?” It’s hard to use words to let the tales that the body feels while the mind fails You are the cause of this kind of feeling to be running through me veins because of the disappointments that disturb my heart and brain With your high inspiration of words which left the heart, mind and soul. Then Buff, It would have felt better if you had clapped me with a stone. The hardness of life has turned me into a stroll, in, up and down on the road. Disappointments attacks, every time another one tries to heal But I will never give up because I want to know how success feels Even though, the pains in the heart and mind, still no heal.

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Date: 3/26/2011 1:56:00 PM
Nice narrative expressions on Electric, Mervin
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