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Eleanor Rigby

You may have known her as fable or fiction But she was as real as deep blue oceans And glorious dawns of rising golden sun; Not quite blessed with grace of humanity Hurting miserably in wounded dark alleys-- One among many--misdeeds of destiny Trapped within inescapable pathos of society. Like summer storms that churn hazy winds And sound of glum-thunder ignites lightening, Formidable was trauma of her throbbing beats Haunting heart sorrowful, wistful, and lonely Each time she looked up and dared to breathe. Silently she stood there at gate of misery Solitary like a tombstone no one ever visits; A mother, a sister, a daughter, a homemaker In plain sight on some corners of the world Where echoes of quietude often got ignored. Hurting miserably in wounded dark alleys, Solitary like a tombstone no one ever visits, Silently she stood there at gate of misery; Face of the faceless --she was Eleanor Rigby. August 13, 2019 Eleanor Rigby Who Was She Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jerry T Curtis

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Date: 11/14/2020 1:45:00 PM
This is very good, Vijay. I think she was fictional but I don't really know for sure. I'll have to look it up :)
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Date: 9/17/2019 5:56:00 PM
can't find a poem of yours I have not read. Anyway. Looking this one over again and wondering, when will this contest be judged? I sure hope we both make the winner list!! (oh, I just saw the judge name. I don't think I have ever won with him) Anyway, good luck to YOU then.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 9:14:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 9/12/2019 7:06:00 PM
I enjoyed giving this one a second read.
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Date: 9/25/2019 9:14:00 AM
Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.
Date: 9/2/2019 9:35:00 PM
Very well written with effective, compelling and heart-tugging imagery that are smoothly and effectively delivered with all but a tissue! This hits home with the song, as do many excellent entries I've read - this is one of them. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/25/2019 9:13:00 AM
Much appreciate CayCay--many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 8/26/2019 1:45:00 PM
An excellent entry for the contest, Vijay. There are many ways we can view the character of Eleanor Rigby, real or fictional. Your interpretation truly hit me as I live alone and know too well some of the feelings you describe her having. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2019 7:40:00 AM
You are always so kind my friend..a pleasure to read your comments and your poems. Stay well, Carolyn!!
Date: 8/17/2019 6:00:00 PM
Although Eleanor Rigby was a fictional character, she represents many others who suffer pain and loneliness. Your excellent poem highlights all this and more, Vijay. ~ Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2019 11:10:00 AM
You are so right about her..much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.
Date: 8/17/2019 5:30:00 PM
Wow, great dedication to her. Well done and I'm sure she'd appreciate it.
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Date: 8/21/2019 11:10:00 AM
So kind of you my friend..much appreciate..many thanks.
Date: 8/16/2019 8:51:00 PM
I am not familiar with her but reading your poem makes me want to look her up and take in the information because you have brought her to life and sparked my curiosity... wonderful penning and story telling in this poem! Enjoyed reading it tonight :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2019 7:09:00 AM
You are so very kind..much appreciate Sandra. The contest theme is fictional..because the song it is based on was not about a specific person..many thanks.
Date: 8/16/2019 11:21:00 AM
"Silently she stood there at gate of misery; Face of the faceless --she was Eleanor Rigby" ! So expressive and impressive are the words summing up what Eleanor Rigby symbolises! So powerful the imagery! So aching the diction! As a great poet, you have the credit to wipe the dust off these "unseen" people.. those who are not "blessed with grace of humanity".. you do offer them a dignified existence into your unique poetry! A gem of humanity to cherish in my fave list.. Best regards, dear Vijay.
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Date: 8/16/2019 4:32:00 PM
You are so right Besma about the unseen people who ache silently...your analysis is spot on. Always such a joy to read your thoughtful comments..much appreciate as always your vote of confidence..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE my fiend. Regards!
Date: 8/15/2019 8:49:00 PM
Within your words, these moments become real. Her presence is here, while I am reading this. Her heart, the loneliness and the pain. I can truly feel. You always know how to move me with your thoughts. Taking me there. "Solitary like a tombstone no one ever visits" Such a terrible feeling. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/16/2019 7:32:00 AM
You are so right--indeed it is a horrific feeling to see a human being in pain. Though the writer of the song wrote this as fiction..I believe he had in mind sufferings of many like her. Much appreciate your analysis, as always..many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 8/14/2019 5:32:00 PM
very profound, Vijay, especially the ending. I expect this one will do well in the contest. I find it a topic difficult to write about.
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Date: 8/15/2019 11:06:00 AM
Much appreciate your comments, Andrea...many thanks..hope you write one on this theme..looking forward.
Date: 8/14/2019 4:40:00 PM
Wow, you light up the screen and her, Vij, keep up the brilliant writes. xo ps. I have added an audio to my meditation. if you are interested. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=raiY0zceoyw Please have a listen. Thanks
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/14/2019 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Pixie--appreciate the kind remarks. I did go to your audio..indeed it is more soothing in your words--well done, friend.
Date: 8/14/2019 3:57:00 PM
incredible write, vijay... paul spoke of her in an interview saying she was a fictional character...nonetheless, your portrayal of a distraught eleanor stands out among the ones i had read so far... a top spot for the contest!...huggs
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Date: 8/14/2019 5:14:00 PM
Much appreciate your kind feedback Nette..glad you liked it..many thanks.
Date: 8/14/2019 2:23:00 PM
Wow Vijay, you make this lady come to life and her sadness almost palpable. I love how you use the weather and it's darkness of thunder and lightning in the storm to dramatize her pain of loneliness. There was indeed a lady named Eleanor Rigby but she 's not the person they write about in their song. Paul invented her, I can only imagine the impact the song made on the real Eleanor's family that lived in Liverpool I believe. I hope this wins First you Vijay as it is beautifully written. xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 3:29:00 PM
Yes--Paul even denies knowing about her when he wrote that song. In my mind.. Paul created the character to speak of many who suffer in loneliness. I am so happy to have your vote of confidence Connie! Can't thank you enough for your good wishes..much appreciate as always..many many thanks.
Date: 8/14/2019 8:46:00 AM
I’m enjoying these Eleanor Rigby pieces. Well done Vijay.
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Date: 8/14/2019 2:11:00 PM
Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.
Date: 8/13/2019 4:31:00 PM
She was one lonely woman who led a miserable existance, and sadly no one cared. You captured it well in your verse. Sad that in our big cities with thousands of people there are some who lead lonely lives. Good luck Vijay. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/14/2019 8:07:00 AM
Yes indeed Tom--she was an emblem of people all over..much appreciate your kind words..many thanks.

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