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Elaelana- A Nymph In the Forest Inspired by Charles Amable Lenoir's painting, "A Nymph In the Forest" Pronunciation: Elaelana; Eh-lee-LAY-nuh, Naphesai; Nah-feh-SIGH, Mylesia; My-lee-SEE-uh Elaelana, forest goddess, kneels beside the water lilies Picking dainty, gem-like flowers to adorn her crown of hair; Borrowed gems from Naphesai, her lovely sister of the daisies, Flow'rs that thrive in shady woodlands, by the streamlet floating there. Dressed for nymphean starlit dances in a dress of flowing creamrose; Flawless slender arms upraised to rearrange the sable strands Trailing from her Grecian features, pearly white against the gleamrose Of silent lips, a little pressed, like rosebuds' tightknit ruby bands. Ready now, so tall and stately, shadowlike drifts thro' the forest, Joined at length by Mylesia, and her sister, Naphesai: Elaelana, Mylesia, Naphesai, the sweetest, fairest Threesome ever seen or heard that sang the nymphish lullabies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/14/2018 4:42:00 AM
A wonderful poem. A epic journey.
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:57:00 PM
Isaiah, CONGRATULATIONS, on your awesome 12 liner Ekphrasis WIN! :) SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2015 3:06:00 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2015 3:51:00 AM
Exquisite write my dear poet friend Isaiah!Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/9/2015 12:29:00 AM
congrats on your big win.. this is so mystical and well done!
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:39:00 PM
What a beautiful picture...a fairy land theme... congrats on your deserving win
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Date: 2/8/2015 4:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/8/2015 12:14:00 PM
You have captured the essence of her beauty so effortlessly in this poem that painting and poem are ONE! Outstanding writing Isaiah. I am fav'ing this beauty. 7+
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Date: 2/8/2015 10:45:00 AM
You bring your lovely paintings to us and it is much appreciated..this is lovely..congrats. Barbara
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Date: 2/7/2015 7:21:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Isaiah. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:15:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Isaiah:-) simply sublime I so love this and the beautiful image and imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/30/2015 8:37:00 PM
this is so metrical and effortlessly rhymed. I think this contest has not been judged yet if it is for the one I am thinking of, and it deserves a top placement. I wish I could find a poem of yours I have not commented to yet. but I have been clicking away and still have not discovered it. Let me try a little bit more!!!
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Date: 1/7/2015 4:02:00 PM
I think you did this challenge so well!! and thanks for what you said to me. I would rate you in the top ten of poets here who know how to use meter with rhyme to its best advantage!!
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Date: 1/7/2015 11:12:00 AM
Outstanding work Isaiah! To understand had to read twice!
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:00:00 PM
Divine image - simply outstanding poem and just in awe Isaiah! Good luck in the contest - a 7 from me wish it could be a 10! :-) hugs Jan xx
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