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El Dorado

Men have searched throughout history For a city made of gold So much in fact it has become legendary This city that has yet to unfold Some have even died I am told. The story says, a chief had an initiation Covered in gold dust and jumping A lake bottom became his situation Now known as the golden king Where is El Dorado they would sing? Legends grew from a king to a city Spaniards knew this gold had to be won Expeditions to discover it were plenty One such Conquistador even discovered the Amazon Female warriors there had them on the run. If you have not guessed this legend yet It is El Dorado or City of Cibola That all were searching to get Nicholas Cage tried finding it in the cinema A fake explorer made the most pesetas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2011 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, Brian
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Brian in the contest "Legends" sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:43:00 PM
Your last two lines sure made me snicker-- cute way to end this :D-- Super congrats on your win with this very intriguing legend-- really enjoyed reading this Brian :D
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:30:00 PM
congrats on your win Brian with this interesting tale penned
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:06:00 PM
Congrats Brian on another big win in another contest with another great write ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:45:00 PM
An interesting story well told. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:13:00 PM
Great Job Brian. Congratulations on your worthy poem's sixth place success. Loved it. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:01:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this wonderful legend, Brian. Most entertaining. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/12/2011 1:18:00 PM
Congrats, Brian. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 4/12/2011 11:01:00 AM
Brian, John and I enjoyed this poem very much. I especially loved the last two lines -- nice touch of humor! Congratulations on placing 6th in the contest. The competition was strong so you can be proud of your placement! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:55:00 AM
Interesting poem about the city of gold..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:02:00 PM
Wonderful read this afternoon. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:59:00 PM
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:19:00 AM
very interesting write for the contest, best of luck Brian
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:13:00 AM
Creative and expressive verses on El Dorado city of gold, Brian
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