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Eileen

Eileen was born 80 1/2 years ago on the first day of winter on the ground a bit of snow with a twinkle in her eyes and a healthy glow having both outer and inner beauty to bestow, Second oldest girl who blossomed and bloomed living in Queens New York who shared with oldest sister a room becoming a responsible teen none too soon always helping out grabbing a dustpan and broom, Worked various jobs till one fateful day met a cop named John and they were on they're way having many things in common you could say both falling in love without delay, Marriage came quickly and the five children too getting up early to help them get off to school summertimes bringing them to the pool teaching them manners and the golden rule, Her children grew up and some moved away plans for retirement finally came one day first Florida for fifteen years in the sun they would play then in 2000 back to New York because couldn't stay, With her husbands different health issues taking good care of him was nothing new a nurturing wife whose complaints were seldom and few rubbing his feet due to neuropathy as if right on cue, On the 14th of May in 2014 her husband died having taken care of his diabetes and melanoma all in stride just short of 60 years she had been his bride at his funeral at his casket she'd weep and cry, Still full of energy she didn't act her age gardening and shopping till her own health turned a page feeling rundown acute leukemia in her system would rage first and only round of chemo being this past May, Shortly thereafter her health got worse congestive heart plus low sodium levels were an added curse discharged from the hospital her eldest became her "nurse" with other family members on her bedroom hospital bed perched, Her oxygen machine tube trailing up to her nose she told everyone she loved them being in the know asking Jesus to forgive all her sins she was ready to go too soon to leave now an underground irish rose in repose, Now Eileen and John await Resurrection day when Jesus will come and take His children away reunited for eternity they'll turn to one another and say I told you I'd wait for you come what may... Addendum: My beautiful Mom took her last breath at her home in N.Y. on July 9th 2017 at 9:45 a.m. I was fortunate enough to spend some time together with her before she passed away... Rest in peace Mom and Dad till we all meet again…

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Date: 7/28/2017 7:45:00 AM
She is smiling from heaven I'm sure :) Wonderful tribute, Cheryl
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/28/2017 8:01:00 AM
I am just glad my Mom is at peace although do miss her…thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Gayle~Che :)
Date: 7/25/2017 10:28:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your Mom Cheryl, my sincerest condolences it must be a terrible stress, but at least as you say she is not suffering anymore. May God grant you peace in your heart, and comfort you in your loss. John
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/25/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for very kind comment and condolences John; I miss her but at the same time am glad she is not suffering anymore~Che :)
Date: 7/23/2017 8:11:00 PM
I'm so sorry to hear about your mom. My condolences to you and your family. Your poem displayed the kind of woman your mother was. Thanks for sharing such a write- Alexis
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/23/2017 8:56:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and condolences Alexis; yes my Mom was remarkably vibrant for her age until MDS evolved into acute leukemia; she decided to not do anymore chemo after she ended up twice in the hospital after having 5 straight days of it…thanks again Alexis~Che :)
Date: 7/19/2017 6:19:00 AM
Sorry to hear about the passing of your mum, this is a beautiful insight to the lady that she was... You are in my thoughts and prayers..
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/20/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; my Mom was a remarkable person who will be missed…Che :) PS Thanks so much for your thoughts and prayers too S/O...
Date: 7/18/2017 8:33:00 PM
Awe Che, most beautiful heartfelt story of your parents. May the reunited in joy in Heaven. My prayers to you and your family...xoxo, Kina
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/18/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and prayers Kina xoxo~Che :)
Date: 7/16/2017 7:30:00 PM
Beautifully sad... So sorry to hear about your mom but praise Jesus she and your father were saved!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/16/2017 11:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike~thank God my Mom isn't suffering anymore and at peace~Che :)
Date: 7/16/2017 5:26:00 PM
What a beautiful way to "grieve." You inspired me to love your parents and to love you and wish you peace.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/16/2017 10:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Sunlite; in turn your loving comment is an inspiration to me~Che :)
Date: 7/16/2017 5:10:00 PM
Cheryl, mere words can't convey the necessary comfort you should have during this time of bereavement. I'm sorry for your loss, truly I am. This was a soul rending testament of love written by your sorrowful pen. May God comfort your heart, and the faith you displayed in the last stanza will be remembered by me ... hopefully to help strengthen my faith in time of need. Such a beautiful tribute. Ty for sharing. Love and comfort be bestowed upon you.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 7/16/2017 10:55:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and comforting words Freddie~I just thank God my Mom is at peace and not suffering anymore~P & L~Che :)

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