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Eight Was Enough

TV’s Eight was Enough, so was nine too many?
And that nine from a dime, equals one penny.
We look forward to eighteen, so we can vote.
But at half that age, eighteen’s so far remote.
Some may want to chop down snooty twenty-seven;
Just divide by three, or take two from eleven.
Or better yet, add that same two onto seven.
Ah, Jee’s-Louise, these mumble-jumbling, topsy-turvy lines
All pale to the perfection of pure number nine!

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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:59:00 AM
    With nine long having been my favorite number (beacuse it was the number that the great Ted Williams wore on his back), I couldn't help but enjoy reading this well expresssed poem, David. Also, thank you for your recent words on my poem, "She Was Somebody I knew. Carl.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 9:12:00 PM
    Good one, David! Belated congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Dave - Ralph

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 10:10:00 AM
    David , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big win my dear David! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Clever! Terry

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 2:57:00 PM
    Very Good! I like this!